ext_136635 ([identity profile] kotukawi.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] deviator 2007-07-29 10:28 pm (UTC)

I'm not so much miffed as to what the ending was but rather that there was not enough of it. It seemed almost as if Rowling forgot to put in the falling action and the denouement at the end of the story, that it just apexed at the climax... add a few more words for good measure to sound like an ending, and then stop. No reunion or celebration scene of Harry and Ginny (which would have happened, we all know it), nor Harry thanking Neville or the other way around. No in depth conversation with Harry's friends outside Ron and Hermione. It just stopped. But that's me. X)

Did I ever show you my ToS fic? It was with Lloyd and Kratos in the elf village?

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